Please lay me off now!
Positive review from ‘cows tow’
Dead weight breaking bough
Blood, sweat and tear from brow
Not impressed by ‘Sickos’ wow.
Boring fluffy chow
Clueless brat who, what, why, how?
Feedback says, ‘Meow?’
Yawns loudly — my sign of Tao
Release me now freaking sacks sow!
Not wall flower frau
Bend over backwards to plow
Revenge my sweet avow!
Never depart won’t allow
Stronger together their vow
A helpless poem frustrated out of tanka in monorhyme.
Copyright © 2007 by Fluffy von der Flynn. All rights reserved.
Hello Flynn, nice, and good luck!