Pretending in vain
Oh God! Here we go again
Relative kinds feign
Smiles and hugs without rich lane
Fake pictures of love no pain
Angered mind to show
Old granny’s untrimmed nails grow.
Hair smelled of pee flow
Pictures evidenced to sow
December two years ago
Eldest daughter smile
Happy to greet in old Paw style
Granny looked pissed bile
Sitting there bored not hostile
Two siblings chat for awhile
Went back to car Maw
Waiting with our calm
Expect nonsense bomb
from Uncle Dead’s verbal prom
and his smoking balm
Four more samples of tanka in monorhyme.
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Saturday March 24, 2007 – 02:44pm (PDT) Edit | Delete | Permanent Link | 0 Comments
Hello Flynn, nice, and good luck!