The hidden brothers
ate the forbidden apple.
To be among fun
but none of them passed the test
for the eternity bliss.
They are seven knights
who fight to keep us alive.
Here is a postscript:
They cannot buy love for us.
Love is greater than honey.
Two samples of tanka with no end rhymes.
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Hello Flynn, nice, and good luck!