I. Past
Mom’s tearful words flowed.
Her pride and happiness mixed.
She hugged and thanked me.
II. Present
Mom’s faith is with God.
Her prayers are from the heart.
She loves her children.
III. Future
Mom’s dreams will unfold.
Her efforts will not be lost.
She will not forget.
First attempt at senryu (with three different tenses)…
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Hello Flynn, nice, and good luck!