Frozen thoughts in eggshell head
warmed by heater to my right.
Ice cold drink from an ice box
stilled the sleepy mind.
Half closed eyes in blessed state
brought stillness and quietness.
Bright red apples aroused
nectar of old days.
Inner egos in prayerful state
washed over from energy.
Golden apples awakened
nectar of small world.
White igloos against snow white
encased roundness at midnight.
An apple said to an ice:
I’m alive! Alive!
First attempt at dodoitsu (with four progressive examples)…
Revised original 20060310-Igloo Heat (deleted)…
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